Roadside Romeo

Posted On January 29, 2010

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Everyday, he followed me. Sometimes, close at my heels. At other times, he stood afar and stared. Every so often, he would draw nearer from the front. He’d match my pace. If I stopped, he’d stop. If I moved left, he’d move right.

I never once met his gaze. I ignored his presence. And yet my entire self was ever conscious of his movements. His attention never deterred. I never understood his fixation towards me.

There was ever this primal fear that haunted me.  Perhaps the fear was ill-founded. Yet, I panicked. Every time I stepped out. And until I cleared the vicinity. I was frightened that I’d be mauled and swathed with unwanted wet kisses.

Deep down I knew he was just trying to be nice. But I have always been scared of dogs.

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11 Responses to “Roadside Romeo”

  1. zeno

    Good one!what a twist madam! Keep posting frequently :)

  2. Hema

    good one da…. really witty…. was an underlying comparision intended…??

  3. Swetha

    What a climax!!! good one :) Keep writing….

  4. yuvani

    @Zeno, Swetha and Hema: Thank you all :) Keep visiting!

    @Hema: Open to interpretation :P

  5. Roop Rai

    awwww!!!!

    i have a cousin who is mad scared of dogs. another cousin of mine has a dog – a black lab – a GORGEOUS dog .. very friendly. so we took this cousin who is scared of dogs to my cousin’s house who has the dog. oh gosh, the former screamed and ran down five blocks before we knew it. we tried our best to get her comfortable with the dog but to no avail heh. i guess this is a fear that takes a LONGG time to be trained out of. we never had a dog at home and yet, i dunno why i am not scared as much. :|

  6. yuvani

    Hey Roop!!Yeah I guess it takes ages before you can get over the fear or probably never…personally I am scared of all animals :| But I wish it werent so…I’ve heard its great to love and be loved by an animal.

    And welcome to the blog, keep visiting :)

  7. The Alchemist

    I know I am late to the post.
    But I cant seem to forget the earlier policeman stalking you :P ;)

  8. yuvani

    Neither can I ;)

  9. Siddharth

    This is just too good. Perfect Title and a super ending.
    It reminds of me of one of the forwards that I had received 4-5 years back where it till the last line, the reader will be under the impression that the author (girl – a first person narration) is talking about intercourse but what is really happening is it will be her first experience with a dentist!! I donot know if you have read that, If so was that an inspiration for this writeup??

  10. Vidya

    LOL! Good one, with an apt title:) Btw, came in from ‘The Alchemist”s.

  11. yuvani

    Welcome to the blog! I’ve noticed your comments on Alchemist’s too :)

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